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I can't be your oxygen
I came apart, poured into you
I gave you all I am
You took me in
Used me up
Now let me out
Empty air is poison
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This is my first attempt at poetry in years. The idea has been on my mind and #Writers-Workshop's free verse workshop [link] gave me the impetus I needed to try putting down the words. So here is my fashionably late entry for January's workshop, attempting to use rhythm, enjambment, and metaphor.
Let me know what you think. I am always looking to improve.
Let me know what you think. I am always looking to improve.
© 2013 - 2024 ErinM31
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Hello!
As part of 's Found Poetry: Titles as Art project, I've used the title of this wonderful deviation in a poem here:
Tell Me What You've Gone and Done Now
Thank you so much!
As part of 's Found Poetry: Titles as Art project, I've used the title of this wonderful deviation in a poem here:
Tell Me What You've Gone and Done Now
Thank you so much!