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Lyrium and Ashes: Chapter 01 - A Sickness
Slaver Caverns outside of Kirkwall
She liked to eat in front of him. He knew, when he'd had nothing all day but a bowl of gruel, that he'd be waiting on Hadriana at dinner. He would attend her and her "friends" in her opulent apartments, pouring the wine, serving their extravagant meals. Watching him, she would curve her mouth around a juicy bit of steak, eyes half-closed in pleasure. She wanted him to ask for some, to pilfer a taste of the excess they squandered. Fenris would never grant her such a victory.
One of her companions stood near him, reeking of perfume and wine. He did not move, did not let his face betray anything as she scrape
I think I've improved on drawing hair. While not a detailed background, Kaiden is on a bed. 
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It's very nice! I like your take of turning it into a bed with a wall behind it. It must have taken some patience to shade the wall. There's great detail in both the hair and the fingers.
The first thing that struck me about it, though, is that the model seemed a little androgynous. I'm not sure why. I think it might be that the brow is too soft. A bit more shading in the cheek would also bring out the jaw. Other people have said that the face is too light. I think that might be all it needs.
Very nice drawing. Keep up the good work.
This is nice and beautiful! It looks realistic. When looking at the hair, it looks so detailed. All the lines of hair makes it looks real and amazing. The shadings are well shaded. I like the curvy lines on the bed. Although, there is one thing that make it looks a little weird. It's head and neck. The neck is too long. It affects the head and make it look a little weird.
Overall, You did a great job, I'd say you'd reach 9/10. All of them are good. I love the hair the most. Well, keep up the good work, have a nice day.
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