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This is the last time

That I will ask forgiveness

For you hurting me
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TheLonelySeeker Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Short but full of meaning, and it fits me perfectly, too :(

:cling:

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ErinM31 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Thank you :heart: :huggle:
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HanaRenee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
oh wow... powerful
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ErinM31 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
thank you :heart:
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HanaRenee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
my pleasure
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skimtony Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Also, it is very poignant.
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ErinM31 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Thank you! :)
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skimtony Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
It fits haiku form (syllable/monad wise), although it's not about a season.
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ErinM31 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Yes, I wondered if anyone would notice that! ;) I might try writing an actual haiku sometime (with the appropriate subject matter), but the structure felt right for this too.
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EmmaWatson666 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Student General Artist
A+
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