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It's very nice! I like your take of turning it into a bed with a wall behind it. It must have taken some patience to shade the wall. There's great detail in both the hair and the fingers.

The first thing that struck me about it, though, is that the model seemed a little androgynous. I'm not sure why. I think it might be that the brow is too soft. A bit more shading in the cheek would also bring out the jaw. Other people have said that the face is too light. I think that might be all it needs.

Very nice drawing. Keep up the good work.